Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, Li, monitor of our class, is an example. He distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.
When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. Li always has a strictly-followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentively and takes notes in class, keeping close pace with the teacher. After class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.
From Li we can learn that a student’s good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. Good habits are very important. We may benefit from them or suffer from the absence of them.
【亮点说明】 范文中运用一些常见的短语benefit sb 使某人受益；makes full use of充分利用；takes notes做笔记；depends on依靠；attaches great importance to认为。。很重要；suffer from遭受；When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork.这个句子中考查到非谓语动词，第一个that引导宾语从句，第二个that引导定语从句；Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.这个句子中with which 引导非限制性定语从句；